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<oembed><version>1.0</version><cache_age>21600</cache_age><provider_name>Sheezy.Art</provider_name><provider_url>https://sheezy.art</provider_url><author_name>imorb</author_name><author_url>https://sheezy.art/imorb</author_url><thumbnail_url>https://sheezy.art/content/uploads/user-897/20211226014113-72c20b0b-95675dc7-c6329c62-6603b222.png</thumbnail_url><thumbnail_width>640</thumbnail_width><thumbnail_height>640</thumbnail_height><type>rich</type><title>Sheezy Critiques II</title><width>660</width><height>660</height><url>https://sheezy.art/imorb/journal/sheezy-critiques-ii</url><html>&amp;lt;article&amp;gt;&#xD;
	&amp;lt;h1&amp;gt;Sheezy Critiques II&amp;lt;/h1&amp;gt;&#xD;
	&amp;lt;p&amp;gt;hello, first off i wanna say the first round of critiques went really well. i saw a lot of good commentings going around. this is awesome to see and i hope it continues to be postive! (obviously if anyone is giving you a hard time, please let me know!) for now i think i'll be posting these once or twice a month, but we'll see how it goes. ^ ^&amp;lt;/p&amp;gt;&#xD;
&amp;lt;p&amp;gt;secondly, for those that don't know, i've become an offcial sheezy helper. basically not a mod, but a rung under a mod. so if you have any questions about the site or just need help in general even, feel free to reach out to me. that includes anything you would talk to a mod about, i just don't have authority to make any final decisions myself. i also try to make resource lists/share resources from other creators if you need art help. my goal is to make everyone's experience on here fun.&amp;lt;/p&amp;gt;&#xD;
&amp;lt;p&amp;gt;alright, rules are same as last time! i've copied them bellow just so it's clear though. let's get critiquing! &amp;amp;lt;3&amp;lt;/p&amp;gt;&#xD;
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&amp;lt;p&amp;gt;The short version is: post in the comments a piece you&amp;amp;rsquo;d like to get constructive criticism on, critique other users in the thread, and grow as artists together!&amp;amp;nbsp;&amp;lt;/p&amp;gt;&#xD;
&amp;lt;p&amp;gt;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;I&amp;amp;rsquo;m planning to post a journal weekly for submissions. I&amp;amp;rsquo;m hoping to emulate the experience of getting critiques in an art school setting. (No, this is not offcial in any way! I just know not everyone wants this level examination, but some people do and I will say critiques are what have helped me the most as an artist.)&amp;lt;/p&amp;gt;&#xD;
&amp;lt;p&amp;gt;Your comment should include the piece, the medium, and any details you&amp;amp;rsquo;d like people to know. Perhaps what you&amp;amp;rsquo;d like to convey with the piece or what you think you might want help with. It MUST be a specific piece. Pieces should be submitted by Saturday to give everyone a chance to comment on it.&amp;lt;/p&amp;gt;&#xD;
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&amp;lt;p&amp;gt;Rules:&amp;lt;/p&amp;gt;&#xD;
&amp;lt;p&amp;gt;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;1. Critique should not be bashing on a piece. Don&amp;amp;rsquo;t be negative. Comments should be made from a place of positivity.&amp;amp;nbsp;&amp;lt;/p&amp;gt;&#xD;
&amp;lt;p&amp;gt;Ex: &amp;amp;ldquo;You did x completely wrong&amp;amp;rdquo; vs &amp;amp;ldquo;I liked a, b , c, but I think x could use some work. Something I do to help me is ____.&amp;amp;rdquo;&amp;amp;nbsp;&amp;lt;/p&amp;gt;&#xD;
&amp;lt;p&amp;gt;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;2. Try to be thoughtful with your critique. It is not enough to say you like a piece or do not.&amp;lt;/p&amp;gt;&#xD;
&amp;lt;p&amp;gt;Consider things such as: concept, composition, lighting/values, color, linework, balance, contrast, &amp;amp;nbsp;anatomy, ect. You don&amp;amp;rsquo;t have to include everything, but try to look at works with a critical eye.&amp;lt;/p&amp;gt;&#xD;
&amp;lt;p&amp;gt;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;3. Do not redline a work unless asked for by the artist.&amp;lt;/p&amp;gt;&#xD;
&amp;lt;p&amp;gt;Redlining is when you sketch over an existing piece to better illustrate a fix. This is often done for anatomy, but could be for something like composition as well. It&amp;amp;rsquo;s rude to do this without permission.&amp;lt;/p&amp;gt;&#xD;
&amp;lt;p&amp;gt;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;4. If you submit a piece to be critiqued, you must critique another person&amp;amp;rsquo;s work.&amp;amp;nbsp;&amp;lt;/p&amp;gt;&#xD;
&amp;lt;p&amp;gt;This is to be fair. You have until the end of Sunday to post a comment.&amp;amp;nbsp;&amp;lt;/p&amp;gt;&#xD;
&amp;lt;p&amp;gt;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;5. Don&amp;amp;rsquo;t take any one person&amp;amp;rsquo;s opinion as law.&amp;lt;/p&amp;gt;&#xD;
&amp;lt;p&amp;gt;While the main point of the exercise is to make you comfortable with getting feedback, please don&amp;amp;rsquo;t take any one person&amp;amp;rsquo;s opinions as facts. You might have a reason you did something and prefer to stick with that. That&amp;amp;rsquo;s completely fine! Many things in art are subjective.&amp;amp;nbsp;&amp;lt;/p&amp;gt;&#xD;
&amp;lt;p&amp;gt;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;6. Don&amp;amp;rsquo;t break the rules.&amp;lt;/p&amp;gt;&#xD;
&amp;lt;p&amp;gt;They&amp;amp;rsquo;re simple. The point is to be helpful. If I see someone breaking the rules they will get a warning. If it keeps happening you will be blacklisted from my critique circle.&amp;amp;nbsp;&amp;lt;/p&amp;gt;&#xD;
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