Long time no see!

I drew this as part of my mission for there to be more art of Testament with women. They're on the May Ship :]

Something about this drawing is irking me badly. I've been chipping away at this for a month and I feel so dissatisfied with it, but I don't want to keep adding things because I want to move on and draw something else. Please tell me why this drawing is bad, or why it's actually good and my brain is just being weird, if possible.