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After much feedback and planning, I am redoing the first scene. This will now serve as page 1!

old page 1, for the curious:
https://www.deviantart.com/ashlychee/art/Untitled-Hyena-Comic-Page-1-critique-welcome-977025641

We're just on page 1, so this is not applicable yet, but I'd like to set the boundary now so that there's no mistake later- please do not post spoilers in previous pages. I know it's tempting on re-reads, but please leave your epiphanies on or after the relevant pages so it doesn't spoil the surprises for new readers.

This is just a rule that i plan to have for my comics.

EDIT 3/3/24: touched up colors and made corrections
Made in February 2024