(this redraw's been sitting in my stash for a while and i tried making it brief but i'm not deleting the original :'D)
it looks so much better now and i even fixed the mistake i made back then in Sorombi's panel (didn't notice i made a mistake in there? good for you :P )
I don't know how to feel about that lightning tho-

(just cuz all of them are "clan born" doesn't mean that a "1000 year respawn" kirin like Devolos couldn't rule, although they would have to take the risk of fighting the current ruler- it's easier if you're hatched into it but it's a lottery ya know ¯_(ツ)_/¯ (jeez i need a new and shorter name for that-))

Sorombi and Ridgeford's backstories are shorter than Thunderon's and Serenity's because i plan to post some "kirin history" lore when it isn't going to spoil something in the comic and part of their backstories are part of this lore :'>

https://www.deviantart.com/silentstarfall/art/4-Kirin-Kiridan-Rulers-Redraw-Bios-1000986224 - full desc