Okay, i am going to be honest, the comic still isn't going, i do have the whole first chapter sketched, and i am still checking out places to post it, isn't suppose to come out yet, but i am having issues:

Is understandable whats happening? the laying is good? what tone the story seems to have?

I think i should up the contrast, maybe is too gray and i need more black and white extremes, is the first page so it should be nice, maybe a layer with color in multiplication?
Sorry, is just that i have already painted a few pages like this, and maybe i should change it and do it different for the rest, i don't know if i like it much.

So please, if someone has some advice, or idea, or critique, comment below. Thanks