Still my fav 2022 piece

This is what happens when I get inspired by a song. Critiques are always wanted! Redlining is encouraged!
Character: https://toyhou.se/13145312.dakota

Fix me, fix me
Say that you miss me
Tell me all the lovely things that I want to hear
Tell me, tell me, loud and clear
That you still really want me
'Cause I'm right here~

Right Here - Chase Your Words