- WHO
- CARES
- HUMANS
- ?
I found this out from a youtube artist. I'm not much of a furry.
Here's the beginning of a story I started writing years ago... Small Sample.
In the year 2164, it’s been thirty years after the people of Earth made contact with other beings. They are called ‘Hybrids’. These hybrids are half human and half animals. Unfortunately, the king of the Crystal Emerald city were against having even a single hybrid run loose in his city, so he banned them and they had to live in Dark City. However, there were other humans living in Dark City, and they welcomed these hybrids with open arms.
Six years later, the king and queen had a sweet newborn baby. It was a girl. They loved her very much. They named her Mary Leblanc. Throughout the first few years of Mary’s life everything went great. That ended when she got to kindergarten. She was about five years old and kids always made fun of her hair color and eye color. She had silver hair and red eyes. Students and adults though she was a vampire. She was always being made fun of. Mary was always being ignored by the teachers and students. The only friend she had was the imaginary little flying blue rodent she made up.
About the same time, the mother found out she was pregnant once more with another child. She got scared and pissed off at the same time, so she ran away. With the mother gone, Mr. Leblanc couldn’t take care of his daughter. He looked throughout the town, but couldn’t find anyone to take care of Mary. Half a year went by before he found someone. He lives in the mountains and is a sword master. He is strong and can take care of many things including his health.
He is actually known to the whole country as Mr. Samurai. Mary’s father asked the guy about raising her.
“Excuse me sir.” Mr. Leblanc asked.
The man turned around.
“Yes?” he said.
“I have a request. Could you please look after my daughter? I can’t do it anymore.” The father begged.
“Why?” the man asked. “What about her mother?”
“It’s because I can’t take care of her alone. Her mother ran away after she found out she was pregnant with another child.”
“I’ll do what I can.”
The man left and the father was forever heart broken. He lost his wife and his only children. He got upset and went to bed.
A month later, people started seeing papers and smelled some weird stench coming from the Leblanc house. The police were called. The police found a man lying in his bed dead. Everyone knew he had a wife and a child but they were nowhere to be found. The ambulance took Mr. Leblanc out in a stretcher. The police was putting out an eye watch for his wife or the kid.
Mrs. Leblanc ran out of town and escaped into a dark city. A city where people were weird looking. There were hybrid humans. These hybrids are half humans-half animals. Her water broke and was giving pregnant in the dark alley. A few hybrids were coming to her due to the screams.
“GET AWAY!” she screamed loudly until she fainted from the pain.
Two wolf hybrid men took her to their hospital for help. Hours later, she woke up and saw she was in a room filled with both humans and hybrids. She was so freaked out she started hyperventilating too much and passed out again. Finally she woke up once more and then saw only a human doctor and human nurse in the room.
“Was that a dream?” Mrs. Leblanc asked.
“What?” the doctor responded.
“These animal humans are they all gone?”
Is this site even worth anything being here? I'm very new here, but I don't understand.
Here's the beginning of a story I started writing years ago...
In the year 2164, it’s been thirty years after the people of Earth made contact with other beings. They are called ‘Hybrids’. These hybrids are half human and half animals. Unfortunately, the king of the Crystal Emerald city were against having even a single hybrid run loose in his city, so he banned them and they had to live in Dark City. However, there were other humans living in Dark City, and they welcomed these hybrids with open arms.
Six years later, the king and queen had a sweet newborn baby. It was a girl. They loved her very much. They named her Mary Leblanc. Throughout the first few years of Mary’s life everything went great. That ended when she got to kindergarten. She was about five years old and kids always made fun of her hair color and eye color. She had silver hair and red eyes. Students and adults though she was a vampire. She was always being made fun of. Mary was always being ignored by the teachers and students. The only friend she had was the imaginary little flying blue rodent she made up.
About the same time, the mother found out she was pregnant once more with another child. She got scared and pissed off at the same time, so she ran away. With the mother gone, Mr. Leblanc couldn’t take care of his daughter. He looked throughout the town, but couldn’t find anyone to take care of Mary. Half a year went by before he found someone. He lives in the mountains and is a sword master. He is strong and can take care of many things including his health.
He is actually known to the whole country as Mr. Samurai. Mary’s father asked the guy about raising her.
“Excuse me sir.” Mr. Leblanc asked.
The man turned around.
“Yes?” he said.
“I have a request. Could you please look after my daughter? I can’t do it anymore.” The father begged.
“Why?” the man asked. “What about her mother?”
“It’s because I can’t take care of her alone. Her mother ran away after she found out she was pregnant with another child.”
“I’ll do what I can.”
The man left and the father was forever heart broken. He lost his wife and his only children. He got upset and went to bed.
A month later, people started seeing papers and smelled some weird stench coming from the Leblanc house. The police were called. The police found a man lying in his bed dead. Everyone knew he had a wife and a child but they were nowhere to be found. The ambulance took Mr. Leblanc out in a stretcher. The police was putting out an eye watch for his wife or the kid.
Mrs. Leblanc ran out of town and escaped into a dark city. A city where people were weird looking. There were hybrid humans. These hybrids are half humans-half animals. Her water broke and was giving pregnant in the dark alley. A few hybrids were coming to her due to the screams.
“GET AWAY!” she screamed loudly until she fainted from the pain.
Two wolf hybrid men took her to their hospital for help. Hours later, she woke up and saw she was in a room filled with both humans and hybrids. She was so freaked out she started hyperventilating too much and passed out again. Finally she woke up once more and then saw only a human doctor and human nurse in the room.
“Was that a dream?” Mrs. Leblanc asked.
“What?” the doctor responded.
“These animal humans are they all gone?”
Two boys are playing and the younger boy started to move objects with the mind. The older boy tried but failed. Years later, the boy kept doing it, and got stronger. His older brother tried, but can only do it very weakly, and with small objects.
The jedi heard of this and came to the village. They wanted to recruit him, but the older bother was angry "You can't take my brother away from me!"
"I promised I'd protect him." He tried to show his powers, but they were not impressed. He got angry and told the jedi he hated them. And ran away.
The boy was struggling to use his powers and as he watched his bother be taken form his village from up on the hill, he got angrier and without noticing, the object he held in his hand got crushed and he threw it away and the pieces flung right into a tree.
A man hiding his face saw this and was shocked. "So, you're powerful, a rely you for your age?"
"I am not. Those jedi said I'm weak. See?" The cloaked and masked man saw his weak force powers.
"Well, you may not be strong now, but my master would be able to train you, if you want to get stronger."
The boy looked at his village and the jedi flying off ad then nodded to the man. They walked away into the forest.
The boy's parents were trying to find their older son and got scared.
The ending:
The jedi boy now a padawan returned home to see his home on fire. Up on the hill, the boy's older brother wearing a black cloak was looking at each other.
Maybe somewhere afterwards:
"Excuse me, master. I have a question."
"Ask, my young padawan."
"Is there a red light saber?"
"What do you mean red?"
"I saw someone that held a light saber, but the blade was colored red."
do research in the restricted section – "It says a red saber is a used by a wielder of the dark side of the force.
The kyber crystal gets broken and bleeds. The red is the blood of the crystal."
One other thought I could implement in the story... That someone might be so depressed and maybe suicidal that even the force; Sith or jedi can't help said person. It shows that even you can't just move your hand around and say things to make it okay. Said person will need to talk with a real person. (Not a real important character, just a scene or two that shows the limits to the force. Not everyone can be saved and the force cannot/should not be used to solve ever issue known to man.)
First female protagonist – Yue
a character who will never play again (Boyfriend)
person who uses computer analysis to understand duel tactics and potential future moves
most main characters are over 18 in age they are not in grade school or high school anymore, college 18-26 years
phantom dueling?
Yue wants to be the next Duel Queen
two workers
girl 1 – worker (16) – in high school, but also in duel credit college class with Yue and boy 1
boy 1 – worker (21) – in college class with Yue
girl 2 – girl 1's sister (12-14)
either beginning of the show or a flashback:
Yue was younger and showed guy who becomes her gf in future dueling for the finals
she finds guy a bit attractive
good friend won semi-finals
guy 1 fights his rival or someone bad.
Low LP on both sides. Both are getting tired, huffing and physically tired and injured.
Something bad happened. The attack caused guy to faint from the attack ends in a tie, but main guy is having a heart attack caught him to forfeit and rival to advances to the finals.
She meets dude in hospital and they talk
In the sterile confines of the hospital room, Yue's footsteps echoed softly as she approached the bedside of the fallen Duelist, her heart heavy with empathy. His once-vibrant eyes now bore the weight of defeat, casting a somber pall over the otherwise antiseptic environment. The young man's body was a testament to the bruising battle he had endured, bandages swathing his broken limbs. Yue's gaze lingered upon his pale face, etched with a mix of pain and resignation. She had heard whispers of his epic Duel, a clash of wills and strategies that had pushed both combatants to their limits. But fate, in its relentless capriciousness, had dealt him a cruel blow, and he now lay defeated and broken.
As Yue's presence filled the room, a flicker of recognition crossed the Duelist's eyes. His lips parted slightly, as though to speak, but a feeble cough escaped instead. Yue reached for his hand, her touch gentle and comforting. 'I'm here,' she whispered, her voice soothing as a balm. 'You fought bravely.' A faint smile graced the Duelist's lips at her words, a flicker of appreciation lighting up his weary gaze. As she sat by his bedside, Yue listened intently as he recounted the tale of his lost Duel, his voice
tinged with bitterness and regret.
The tv was heard on low showing the victor of the tournament. _
"Pretty amazing." Yue said.
"My best friend." He tried to say.
As the camera zoomed out, second place walked off the playing field away from the stadium.
"What's with that guy?" She asked.
turned away to look at the wall. A moment of silence filled the room until
visits his friend and...
Best friend gives his card back after he beat the jerk who stole guy's card and even got that man's deck. Second place throws his cards away after he loses.
Maybe he gives the deck to Yue who wants to be the duel queen
Years later about 2–4 years they're dating and Yue is training hard while _ is working at his restaurant
She's training, but she accepts that he will never play again. He feels content at his choice.
Yue gets kidnapped. BF job (restaurant) gets interrupted by thugs/goons who work for the kidnapper.
People wearing dark suit and sunglasses enter the restaurant
Goon 1: "We're looking for (BF's name)."
BF: "Yes, sir. That's me. What can I do ya for?" He asked cleaning tables.
Goon 2: "You are required to present yourself to our boss for a duel."
BF: "What?" He asked confused. "A duel? What type of duel?"
Goon 1: "A phantom duel." Man said, pulling out something about phantom duels.
BF: "I don't even know what that is. I have played when I was a teen, but eventually stopped playing all together, and decided I'd never duel again. I think you need to leave."
Goon 2: "I don't think you understand. You will be coming with us." He shows a picture of Yue tied up
to a crane above something.
BF: "I said leave now and let her go!" He yelled, pulling out a dagger from his back pocket.
Goon 1: "You don't get to make demands here." They pull out handgun and shot at some kitchenware utensils and expensive china to force him to meet him somewhere.
Goon 2: "You will meet us here in two hours at this address." They left the restaurant, left the picture and walked out.
Three workers exited from the kitchen to examine the damages.
Girl 1: "What's going on here?"
BF: "Everything's under control."
Girl 2 finds paper on a table. Look at this! She shows it to her sister.
Girl 1: "What's this?"
Boy 1: "What?! Yue is kidnapped?! What happened."
BF: "These two goons came to threaten me to duel against these people to save Yue."
Girl 1: "You have to save her!"
BF: "I will, but I will not be dueling. I'm calling the authorities. They threatened me with a weapon."
Four people enter BF's house and follow him downstairs to the basement. BF opens a few boxes with dust and everyone coughs. He used to enjoy it, but he couldn't keep up with the new rules and changes so he quit, but he does like collecting. He still has an old Duel mat and old duel disk from his youth.
BF: "There you are!"
Girl 2: "What's all this? These look like old dueling tools."
BF: "Don't touch these."
Boy 1: "You still have this stuff? You said you quit dueling, but you kept these. However, these aren't gonna help free Yue."
BF: "Look. If you're not gonna help me, get out of my house and get back to work at the restaurant. If you are, shut up about my stuff. I don't criticize what you have. Or I tried not to."
Everyone looked at each other.
Girl 1: "We didn't mean to hurt you or criticize you. It's just that we haven't met anyone with old duel cards and dueling equipment."
BF: "Well, now you have. Are you gonna help my gf or am I gonna do this all alone?"
Everyone took as many toys and accessories out of the basement to help him find something good.
He pulls out a few binders to look through some old cards he used to enjoy playing with. X-Sabers, Ghostricks, aliens, worms, Ko'aki Meiru, spirits, time thiefs, maybe my own made Elijah archetype
BF: "Listen up before we leave. This is the only time I will be dueling, am I transparent?"
Everyone stared at BF for a moment, shocked, and shook their heads without any more sound. He takes his cards, his tools, and even a katana sword. They all jump in his van and head up to the meeting place.
BF: "Alright, I'm here! Let Yue go, now!"
Someone: "Not until you duel me. Yue told me you're the best duelist around town."
BF: "From past tournaments, not life-threatening duels. And I haven't dueled in over a decade. So, Yue is the strongest duelist, not me."
Someone: "Doesn't matter. If you win, I'll be glad to release your girlfriend. If you lose, she dies along with you and everyone you brought along."
Boy 1 uses his computer to scan the deck BF uses before the duel. He records the duel live stream as the duel progresses, he scans cards on the field and records many duel points and combinations that could be done. Tries to help BF
they end up with a tie…
Throws shuriken to try to release Yue, katana, kunai, dagger, etc. to save her
Either...
-
bad guys leave her hanging
-
bad guys try to take her and fail
-
bad guys try to take her and escape freely with Yue